Some Descriptive Writing Sentences from Last Week
Please have a look at our descriptive sentences that we have been learning to write.
Popping eyes, lemon shape inside.
By Alex
There is a flash of power as the electricity is unleashed from the cloud.By Alexander
Black button eyes like chocolate and it is weird because it has cute eyes.By Arnaud
As the sun rises like a star shining, the skateboarder jumps through air.By Che
Lightning is flashing on the water like a big eel. By Faith
Lighting struck like a very angry sun that is looking down from the clouds, stretching its flames because it wants to shine.By Greta
Black eyes are like a rock and dark as night. By Jake
Thunderstorm struck towers with the flash of power.By Kaycee
I see the lightning it looks evil and I think the thunderstorm has a plan. I see a beam of purple evil light that is coming out of the clouds. By Leith
It lightens up the big purple sky.By MacKenzie
Sun rising up into the air.By Marnie K
Soft fluffy white fur like white cotton candy.By Marnie S
Storm clouds dark blue thunders in the sky.By Maya
The City is lighting up with glare. By Otto
He has shimmery black eyes.By Rea
It’s eyes are the shape like a watermelon.By Rebekah
This storm looks like a Tornado reflecting on to the water like a big sea monster in laser mode then turning into blue jelly. By Rhylee
Gooey feet, flat are orange.By Rose
Flash of lightning hits the building. By Shyann
Sun like a bubble, shimmery and shiny in the sky. By Siobhan
Eyes are red with black holes staring at me.By Tobi
Skateboard flips through the air. By Nate
You all have the best stories ever! From Jayden in Room 2 at Kereru Park Campus. Great use of similes
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ReplyDeleteLots of very cool describing words guys.
ReplyDeleteLovely descriptive language. :)
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ReplyDeleteLove it All so imaginative writing.
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