Monday, 14 March 2016

Some Descriptive Writing Sentences from Last Week

Please have a look at our descriptive sentences that we have been learning to write.

Popping eyes, lemon shape inside.

By Alex

There is a flash of power as the electricity is unleashed from the cloud.By Alexander

Black button eyes like chocolate and  it is weird because it has cute eyes.By Arnaud

As the sun rises like a star shining, the skateboarder jumps through air.By Che

Lightning is flashing on the water like a big eel. By Faith

Lighting struck like a very angry sun  that is looking down from the clouds, stretching its flames because it wants to shine.By Greta

Black eyes are like a rock and dark as night. By Jake

Thunderstorm struck towers  with the flash of power.By Kaycee

I see the lightning it looks evil and I think the thunderstorm has a plan. I see a beam of purple evil light that is coming out of the clouds.  By Leith

It lightens up the big purple sky.By MacKenzie

Sun rising up into the air.By Marnie K

Soft fluffy white fur like white  cotton candy.By Marnie S

Storm clouds dark blue thunders in the sky.By Maya

The City is lighting up with glare.  By Otto

He has shimmery black eyes.By Rea

It’s eyes are the shape like a watermelon.By Rebekah

This storm looks like a Tornado reflecting on to the water like a big sea monster in  laser mode then turning into blue jelly. By Rhylee

Gooey feet, flat are orange.By Rose
Flash of lightning hits  the building. By Shyann

Sun like a bubble, shimmery and shiny in the sky. By Siobhan

Eyes are red with black  holes staring at me.By Tobi

Skateboard flips through the air. By Nate






10 comments:

  1. You all have the best stories ever! From Jayden in Room 2 at Kereru Park Campus. Great use of similes

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  2. Fantastic writing

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  3. Great writing

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  4. Nice writing Room 3!

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  5. Great writing

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  6. Lots of very cool describing words guys.

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  7. Lovely descriptive language. :)

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  9. Love it All so imaginative writing.

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  10. that's really cool

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