Thursday, 6 April 2017

Trying to Persuade Mrs King about Camp

We have been writing to persuade Mrs King to let us go on camp to Shantyown this year.  We have just delivered our letters to her.  Our fingers are crossed!
 
 

8 comments:

  1. Awesome kids I really hope you can all go, it will be so cool. Good luck :-)

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  2. Mel Crossman06/04/2017, 11:00

    Oh cool good luck kids!!!

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  3. Ruma Tahi are writing persuasive letters to Mrs King at the moment too. We would really like to read your camp letters or maybe you can post some on your blog.

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  4. Thank you for your persuasive letters about camp. I have sent a letter in return. In the letter I have granted you the permission to go on camp to Shantytown as your letters were so persuasive and explained to me how it would be a very positive learning experience for you all. I hope you have an awesome time!

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  5. I don't know when we are going but I know that Mrs. Long is writing on paper to see who will go on camp and who won't. I really want to go it will be so fun!

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  7. Hi my name is Ridhi from Papakura Central School in room 8 I love how you guys are persuasiving it propbebly lots of fun I hope he lets you to go to camp and also you should add a some writting so people can see what you persuived...
    Keep it up
    P.S if you ever want to cheek out my blog copy and past this link below
    http://pcsridhisrip.blogspot.co.nz/
    Thanks for sharing.

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  8. Hi there Room 3, it sounds like you guys really want to go on camp and have fun. I'm glad that Mrs king let you guys go on camp!!! What would you guys be doing at your camp?

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